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I had talked about this in the IRC, and was advised to simply post my first version. The character itself is apparently very special, seemingly from the get-go.
My only suggestion is we may want to add dates and places to the history. It's YE 35 now so that would mean he was born in YE 12, I think. So he was able to join the military (at 17) in YE 29 at the earliest (though I'm assuming that he joined more recently. What happened with his family during the Nepleslian independence of YE 28?
I had not been able to find any specifics on the length of the training program. At 23 years of age, he had only just finished the training program, probably joining the military later then 17 years of age.
Seeing his mother had already fled to planet Yamatai before he was born, I did not assume there would be any consequences in regards to other planets gaining independence at the expense of the Empire. Seeing they had already fled said territory, or was I perhaps mistaken?
And I will add ages first very soon in accordance with your request.