Jaqueline, tsk. Pox on you and all that.
Oi, I'll be your reviewer TODAH.
Hm... Appearance wise is fine, albeit my complaint is you could go in more detail but oh well.
Personality will do.
History will do. Could use more detail, like a brief on school life and the work etc.
Alright, the five skills are alright. Slightly surprised there isn't more, given the age, but oh well. However. There are five skills, and while there isn't a MINIMUM, you don't have any skills for the stuff she probably learned going to school; IE Biology. Even if she is JUST going she probably knows a bit, nyeh?
Inventory is fine.
Unapproved at the moment, Tiffeh needs to respond and possibly tweak it, yar.