Approved Character Nathaniel Kygra

[Tylium]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:nathaniel_kygra

My (old) new character

 

[Nashoba]

Believe this should be At war with the SMX "At war with the MNX"

Because your next section is: End of the war

And the NMX war is still ongoing....

You're missing the standard inventory. If he is going to be serving on a starship use the first section

Standard Issue

Other than this items its good.

 

[Tylium]

Entered the required changes to the Inventory and made clearer what was meant with the war.

The part described was actually the assault on Elysia Novus. With you pointing that out, I could see how people could mistake that as well.

 

[Nashoba]

Ok that would be the NMX not MNX.

 

[Tylium]

Dear jolley molley. That I didnt notice that mistake.

It has been edited.

 

[Nashoba]

Approved.