Could use some more detail on the physical description for things like hair, eye color/type, facial features, body build, etc. Things to give a clearer picture of how he looks so that other players can form a clear mental image of who they're interacting with. Additionally, the inventory items could be linked for most of them.
I know I'm not a character mod, but these are just my suggestions from experience. As they help a lot when getting a feel for a character when someone reads the page.