Aaaaahhhhh flakfsdfljlkdfj I'm so lazy with stuff
This review is for: Nepleslian Black Market
The submitted article is/has…
[ Y ] A very high level of overall quality
[ Y ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ Y ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ Y ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ Y ] In the proper format/template
[ Y ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ Y ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ Y ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ Y ] No red and/or broken links
[ Y ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ Y ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[ ARGUABLY ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
- Enough KS buys anything, including secret military armors. Although, FM check is a thing. So it's k.
[ N ] Obtusely redundant
[ N ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ N ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ N ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ N ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ N ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ N ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ N ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ N ] Lacking Detail
[ N ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
[ N ] COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT
- PNY is a computer part manufacturer. While it's possible they might let it slide...let's not take the risk. Ame has renamed to PPY. Which is the name of the Osu! dev...but eh. It's the name of a person, not a company.
The article has…NOT APPLICABLE
[ ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
Status: Approved
Notes
Yes, I'm a nerd. That's how I know that. SHUT UP AME
I intend to finish this review by: 10/29/2017