[Nepleslia] Jackelope APC

[Sigma]

Submission Type: Military
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... kelope_apc

Faction: Nepleslia
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes but up for approval separately
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
To go zoom.

 

[Nashoba]

Review in process, ETA 5/14

 

[Nashoba]

Review complete.

A few items.

No mention of the fuel tank, location capacity. As it stands you give the base range.

The M113 APC created for the US military in the 60's had a range of 480 km, its replacement the Stryker in 1999 had a range 500 km, perhaps you might want to increase the range of this vehicle.

Shouldn't it have some sort of Navigation system, GPS or inertial navigation for example.

And while we are talking about systems, what about communications, heating and cooling, any filtration capacity.

 

[Sigma]

Updated with some of your suggestions. If they need GPS, they'll just use their datajockey

 

[Nashoba]

APPROVED