Approved Submission [Nepleslia] Níos Faide

[Ethereal]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=system:nios_faide

Submission Faction(s)

1. Nepleslia

Submission Type: System
Template Used: System

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? No @Legix
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
Now @Legix has given me the go ahead to do some shennanigans, time to roll out these articles that have been waiting in the shadows for a year >:3

 

[Ethereal]

Bump for any NTSE claim.

 

[Ethereal]

Bump again.

 

[Wes]

This article doesn't really link to other articles. Could you add links where it's appropriate?

I suppose we should wait for the planet article to be approved first.

In the meantime, I'd like to see some summary-style text after each header.

 

[Ethereal]

Updated.

 

[Wes]

Yeah. This looks much better.

Hey, do you need help with planet images? Would you be OK with me adding some placeholders that fit the planet type?

 

[Ethereal]

Go right ahead ^^"
I would get artwork for them but all things considered right now I can just about manage my site supporter subscription haha..

 

[Legix]

FM approved.

BUT.

You need to actually hyperlink Agartha's section properly. If there's a planet with a separate page or something that can be hyperlinked, it needs to be. Especially under their appropriate sections. I'd like that done before this gets approved.

 

[FrostJaeger]

@Ethereal - Will be reviewing this submission later on this evening (read: once I have access to a laptop).

 

[FrostJaeger]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved

 

[META_mahn]

YEETs the thread into Approved

 

[FrostJaeger]

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to Freakin' ninjas... :<
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ N/A ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

I also took the liberty of adding a small table to the Planetary Data section in order to make the article match the star system template. Sorry for missing that... >.<

 

[Ametheliana]

Thanks for reviewing this @FrostJaeger