Approved Submission [Nepleslia] New Yellow Relief and Development Society

[Legix]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:nyrds

Submission Type: Organization
Template Used: N/A (loosely based on the organization/corporation template)
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:nepleslia:nyrds
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:nyrds

Faction: Nepleslia
FM Approved Yet? Yes, me, now.
Faction requires art? Yes (This article doesn't constitute one beyond a logo, but that's not necessary for this type of submission AFAIK.)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes (currently submitted as well)
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:

 

[Ametheliana]

Three Day Approval Timer In Place

 

[Legix]

Three days have passed, now give me your lunch money + that checksheet.

 

[Ametheliana]

This review is for: NYRDS with URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:nepleslia:nyrds

The submitted article is/has…
[✓] A very high level of overall quality
[✓] A general topic sentence under the title header
[✓] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[✓] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[✓] In the proper format/template
[✓] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[✓] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[✓] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[✓] No red and/or broken links
[✓] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[✓] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[✓] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[✓] Obtusely redundant
[✓] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[✓] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[✓] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[✓] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[✓] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[✓] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[✓] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[✓] Lacking Detail
[✓] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[-] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[-] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[-] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[-] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Approved