Approved Submission [Nepleslia] Rapid Launcher Missile System Rework

Okay well for future reference(not needed for this article) only include the text that you're changing in pages like this, and notes about where to put it.

Now for the article, I'm seeing one issue. There is very important information that is hidden away in a text block and can't be seen in a glance. That is that each one of these systems is 4 'cells'/'barrels' and that these ammo rates are per cell. Also that the system can dump and entire cell all at once. (However it's unclear if it can empty multiple cells as once as well) This information needs to be pulled out and made into a 'firing mechanics' block for the weapon system as a whole, and then the missile ammo rates need to be noted clearly that they are 'per cell'.

When dealing with equipment articles you always need to make information related to 'game mechanics' "hard to miss" so that no issue arise in it's use.

Added and changed.

Okay the numbers look good, just one I missed, the Tracers, you need to identify flight range, and signal range. As for the article, where are you adding this snippet to the original page, and what is the exact formatting that'll be used?

I would not know that information on the TRACERs and I am not cleared to make it up off the top of my head. You would need @Charmaylarg Dufrain or @Legix to answer those questions for you.

As for where i'm adding it, the entire page is being replaced.

Okay so none of that information actually seems to exist, so I'm going to have to make this shit up myself. So I did.

okay that looks good enough. I'll go ahead and give this an APPRPOVAL

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So @Legix @Firebrand @Charmaylarg Dufrain you guys want this to just replace the old extended rack page entirely? Or do you want to preserve the old systems on there?

Syaoran said:

So @Legix @Firebrand @Charmaylarg Dufrain you guys want this to just replace the old extended rack page entirely? Or do you want to preserve the old systems on there?

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I'll be doing the editing for the Rapid Launcher and Extended Rack pages myself

okay tell me when they're done so I can look over them and put the final stamps on it all

Okay, done.