Approved Submission [Nepleslia] "Seeds of the Spirit"

[Ethereal]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=species:agarthan:seeds_of_the_spirit

Submission Type: Martial art..?
Template Used: N/A

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? No @Legix
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
Source of racial traits.

 

[Wes]

I suppose it's not that different to the nanomachines that Nekovalkyrja have in them. Seems approvable to me but I'd like a mod to use the checklist.

I would like the first sentence of the article to clearly state what the article is about instead of what the Agartha think these are.

 

[Ethereal]

Rejigged a little and updated.

 

[Ethereal]

It's been nearly a week can I get someone else to review this or something

 

[Ethereal]

Okay I really didn't like what I had written a year ago about nanomachines (yuck) so I replaced it with a new concept within.

 

[Wes]

3-day approval timer.

 

[Ethereal]

I daresay it's more than three days if someone can move this?

 

[Wes]

Approved

 

[Legix]

Dunno why this was thrown beyond me without FM approval.

But FM approved anyway.