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Abandoned Submission [Nepleslia] The Blooded

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Please fix OP links on all submissions as well as put text or prose before lists and after headers.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ X ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ X ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ X ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

1. is Ailceimists a proper noun? Or did you mean Alchemists?
2. Can you add more information where I put
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Emojis? I added a few of the headers you needed from the faction template where I think you needed them. For the 'Information' part you can really just use what you have under the main header so long as you leave a short one or two sentence line there about the page.

3. I think Fomorians needs to be broken off into its own article. Just from reading it I don't think I really get what they are supposed to be.


When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
 
Without posting a checklist, rejection, or approval there is no way to know it's being or been reviewed.
 
Let's let the submitter work with the reviewer on this until it doesn't work, then we'll look at changing reviewers.

For now, @Ethereal, what can you do to your article with that review?
 
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