Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ X ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ X ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ X ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ X ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ X ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ X ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ X ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ X ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. I changed some things around to meet the faction template. Can I have you fill in the empty fields there with something? You don't need more than a line or two under things like information or treaties. You can easily just leave it at 'They haven't contacted any major factions'
2. I think how this is written is very approachable. You don't mention any of the near magic stuff so that is always something we can worry about later. I think once you fill in the remaining parts we can approve this without waiting on anything else. Naturally the approval only extends to this article.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!