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[Neshatem][Revision] Armored Body Suit plus clothing

Kyle

Insane Story Writer Foxy
Inactive Member
Submission Type: Body Suit and Military Uniforms.
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... _body_suit

Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Me!

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? no
Previously Submitted? Yes, but this is a revision, also the original approval thread seems to be gone.

Notes:

The Body Suit has been revised to includ missing details, such as the suits overall armor rating - PDR 3 - and two additional sections including the - Getting Into - and, under the 'Parts of the suit', a - Tail - section which describes what the tailed portion of the armor is made out of.

Also, because the original thread seems to be gone, I'm tacking on the other two uniforms that were with this one originally so that they will have an approved thread again.

Military Uniform
Working Uniform
 
REVIEW COMPLETE

Changes made do not alter the intent of the item, and address a few omissions and some player pain points. Suggestions were made to improve the document those were done.

APPROVED>
 
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