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[Neshaten] Culture Page

Kyle

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Submission Type: Faction Culture Page
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=neshaten:culture

Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Yes, me.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Previously Submitted? no

Notes:

This is the culture page for the Neshaten, there are two unapproved subpages, one is the religion page:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=neshaten:religion

The other is the Order, a religious group that handles all religious activities in the Kingdom, but also carries the responsibility of protecting the homeworld.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... erofmarius

There is a chance I might redo the Order page, I dunno, it doesn't look right to me but perhaps I'm just being harsh on myself.

On another note, there is another unapproved sub-article there but it's already listed here in the NTSE for approval.

If there's information that I haven't listed in the culture page that should be listed, please let me know.
 
Review in Work

Religion page needs more wiki links. At a minimum it should link to the Neshaten page, you reference the Great War, if this is a significant event I trust that you have something in the wiki on it, so it should be linked.

Same with the Culture page, species pages should be linked to.
 
Ok those pages have been fixed,

Question about Calender
Are their months? If so how many? Length? What about weeks? How many and how many days in them?

How long is a day?

What is a Birth Year you do not explain what it is.
 
Made those changes, and I hope I've clarified it a bit.
 
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