[Neshaten] Jui'varen Star System

[Kyle]

Submission Type: Star System
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:juivaren

Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No (being worked on)
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:

Star System to be used in the next Gam'trosha plot.

 

[Wes]

The system is fairly close to the Neshaten's home system and has been tagged as a place for both agriculture and medical.

This seems like there should be more of this sentence. Medical what?

The main star of the Jui'varen star system, it is an orange star.

Why is the picture of a very blue star, then?

 

[Kyle]

Put the wrong image in.. whoops!

As for the description, there was a word missing (development) so I'd added that in.

 

[Kyle]

Can I get some input on this? This being unapproved is holding up my plot right now.....

 

[Wes]

Could you put something in the "System Data" page section? It's currently empty.

 

[Kyle]

Added a sentence.

 

[Wes]

APPROVED