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Overall only two issues that I see. First, what is the family name of the owners, glass for the floor that goes to space. That means the floor is going to be a weak point for the station, and is going to heat up and cool down depending on if its hit by the sun.
Made those fixes, also added a sub-article to the original post; this one details what the transparent armour is.
Also, for some reason my spell-checker is acting up. The one I have for the document I use for writing up these articles wants armour as the spelling, but the spell-checker for my browser wants armor. So, I just stuck with armour