Okay this should've been handled a while ago, so let's dive right in. A few grammar mistakes noticed and fixed, but other than that the main thing that needs to be 'fixed' is that EE003v does not have a corresponding YE date, nor does it have a link to something that can explain when that was, so it will leave readers who don't know the Nesha date system confused.
Other than that I would say, since this is meant to be something actively used, have somewhere in the article an estimate for how many members KF has currently, and an estimate for how many swords their are. It looks like the organization is pretty fluid, so they don't need to e exact figures if you don't want, but these numbers will give players an idea of what they're up against, and will help any future GMs with using the organization. Also I know a number of 13000 members is listed in the article but I don't know if that is still the number.