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Approved Submission [Neshaten] Personal Defense Gauntlet

Kyle

Insane Story Writer Foxy
Inactive Member
Submission Type: Personal Defense Device
Submission URL: Point Defense Gauntlet

Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Yes, me!
Faction requires art? No.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No.
Contains New art? No.
Previously Submitted? Thought I had, but apparently I hadn't. Thus, No.

Notes:

I thought I'd put this up on the wiki a few months back and likewise had it up for approval, but found it no where to be seen so I'll put it up (back up?)

Anywho, this is a limited personal defense device for soldiers, citizens, and law enforcement.
 
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This review is for: Point Defense Gauntlet

The submitted article is/has…
[x] A very high level of overall quality
[x] A general topic sentence under the title header
[-] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[x] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[x] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[x] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[x] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[x] Obtusely redundant
[x] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[x] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[x] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[x] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[x] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[x] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[x] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[/] Lacking Detail
[x] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[-] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[/] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[x] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[x] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Status: This submission is in progress.

1. Can you swap out the power cell for a fresh one?

2. What's the DR of the shield?

3. Are there no differences between civilian/police/military beyond color?
 
Ok added those details. Since the shield is short-lived currently, I think its DR rating is justified. Otherwise, power cell can be swaped and there is no difference beyond colur (yet)
 
That is one tough-as-shit shield. An ADR3 handheld energy shield ...

I think it cuts it close to being OP, but the time duration is enough to mitigate it.

Approved.
 
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