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[Neshaten] She’tan’ora Class Hybrid Exploration Vessel

Kyle

Kyle

Insane Story Writer Foxy
Inactive Member
Submission Type: Warship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rid_vessel

Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten
FM Approved Yet? Yes, me.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yep.
Previously Submitted? Nope.

Notes:

A basic exploration/hybrid ship for the Neshaten.

It has the following unapproved articles:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ant_family
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... light_tank
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ip_battery
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... arraysuite
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... _terminals
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rew_cabins
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ult_bridge
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... en_reactor
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... tal_engine
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ter_turret
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... er_turrets

The civilian ship for this submission is Ge'kina Class Passenger Liner
 
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First glance -- looks alright, but you should go in and clear up some grammar and spelling issues. I'll give it a real review later today.
 
Ok, I think I've fixed all of the spelling errors in the main articles and the accompanying ones.
 
The URL of the merchant article is still misspelled.
 
Yea, didn't notice the incorrect url. I spelled it right in the header, yet misspelled it in the URL....

Replaced the URL in the main post with the correct one.
 
I fixed some errors in the article for you.

How do you justify giving this vessel speeds and tech on par with Nepleslia and Yamatai?

According to the speed standards, an average ship at the standard tech level should have an STL speed of 0.150c.
 
Made an addition, dunno HOW I managed to miss this.

Anywho, added emergency support systems. Also added a deck layout.
 
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