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[Neshaten] She’tan’ora Class Hybrid Exploration Vessel

First glance -- looks alright, but you should go in and clear up some grammar and spelling issues. I'll give it a real review later today.
 
Ok, I think I've fixed all of the spelling errors in the main articles and the accompanying ones.
 
The URL of the merchant article is still misspelled.
 
Yea, didn't notice the incorrect url. I spelled it right in the header, yet misspelled it in the URL....

Replaced the URL in the main post with the correct one.
 
I fixed some errors in the article for you.

How do you justify giving this vessel speeds and tech on par with Nepleslia and Yamatai?

According to the speed standards, an average ship at the standard tech level should have an STL speed of 0.150c.
 
Made an addition, dunno HOW I managed to miss this.

Anywho, added emergency support systems. Also added a deck layout.
 
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