Kyle Insane Story Writer Foxy Inactive Member Jan 11, 2012 #1 Submission Type: Warship Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rid_vessel Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten FM Approved Yet? Yes, me. For Reviewers: Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yep. Previously Submitted? Nope. Notes: A basic exploration/hybrid ship for the Neshaten. It has the following unapproved articles: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ant_family https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... light_tank https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ip_battery https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... arraysuite https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... _terminals https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rew_cabins https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ult_bridge https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... en_reactor https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... tal_engine https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ter_turret https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... er_turrets The civilian ship for this submission is Ge'kina Class Passenger Liner Upvote 0 Downvote
Submission Type: Warship Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rid_vessel Faction: Kingdom of Neshaten FM Approved Yet? Yes, me. For Reviewers: Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yep. Previously Submitted? Nope. Notes: A basic exploration/hybrid ship for the Neshaten. It has the following unapproved articles: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ant_family https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... light_tank https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ip_battery https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rynatorium https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... arraysuite https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... _terminals https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... rew_cabins https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ult_bridge https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... en_reactor https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... tal_engine https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... ter_turret https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ne ... er_turrets The civilian ship for this submission is Ge'kina Class Passenger Liner
SSharp Inactive Member Jan 12, 2012 #2 First glance -- looks alright, but you should go in and clear up some grammar and spelling issues. I'll give it a real review later today.
First glance -- looks alright, but you should go in and clear up some grammar and spelling issues. I'll give it a real review later today.
Kyle Insane Story Writer Foxy Inactive Member Jan 12, 2012 #3 Ok, I think I've fixed all of the spelling errors in the main articles and the accompanying ones.
Wes Founder & Admin Staff Member 🌸 FM of Yamatai 🎖️ Game Master Discord Booster 🎨 Media Gallery Jan 14, 2012 #4 The URL of the merchant article is still misspelled.
Kyle Insane Story Writer Foxy Inactive Member Jan 14, 2012 #5 Yea, didn't notice the incorrect url. I spelled it right in the header, yet misspelled it in the URL.... Replaced the URL in the main post with the correct one.
Yea, didn't notice the incorrect url. I spelled it right in the header, yet misspelled it in the URL.... Replaced the URL in the main post with the correct one.
Wes Founder & Admin Staff Member 🌸 FM of Yamatai 🎖️ Game Master Discord Booster 🎨 Media Gallery Jan 14, 2012 #6 currect Click to expand...
Wes Founder & Admin Staff Member 🌸 FM of Yamatai 🎖️ Game Master Discord Booster 🎨 Media Gallery Jan 14, 2012 #8 I fixed some errors in the article for you. How do you justify giving this vessel speeds and tech on par with Nepleslia and Yamatai? According to the speed standards, an average ship at the standard tech level should have an STL speed of 0.150c.
I fixed some errors in the article for you. How do you justify giving this vessel speeds and tech on par with Nepleslia and Yamatai? According to the speed standards, an average ship at the standard tech level should have an STL speed of 0.150c.
Kyle Insane Story Writer Foxy Inactive Member Jan 19, 2012 #10 Is there anything currently holding this up by chance?
Kyle Insane Story Writer Foxy Inactive Member Feb 1, 2012 #11 Made an addition, dunno HOW I managed to miss this. Anywho, added emergency support systems. Also added a deck layout.
Made an addition, dunno HOW I managed to miss this. Anywho, added emergency support systems. Also added a deck layout.
Wes Founder & Admin Staff Member 🌸 FM of Yamatai 🎖️ Game Master Discord Booster 🎨 Media Gallery Feb 1, 2012 #12 Approved