An ellipsis huh?!
Didn't even know that meant until now, I'll look through the text a few more times.
I guess it's my tendency to write the way I speak and haven't done much correcting as of yet
Neither was I aware of that you shouldn't put a comma there!
Learn something new every day!
And regarding the skills, I thought 7 was the max and less is ok too.
But that won't be a problem.
Didn't realise there were obvious training possibilities within ORIN.
Oh and history wise? If wars are still waged, things get pretty grim.
Earth is perhaps more messed up, but a planet of crime, guns and slavery?
Seems like a very suitable place for a LOT of things to go wrong in a persons life.
It happens here on earth as well.
But that's my thought behind it
And thanks for the compliment, it's not the first character I made, but only the second one that is to fit into an existing universe.
But it's good fun!
Will try to polish it this weekend (but a smartphone isn't ideal for it)
Greets Lara