cyborgakadjmoose
Inactive Member
Hi, here's my character's bio:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... dra_volkov
First I must say I was impressed with the MASSIVE amount of background material. It was kind of overwhelming at first, but I eventually was able to digest it and immerse myself in it.
At first glance, it may seem like my character is some hard-bitten veteran with lots of experience. Well I specifically wanted to avoid that, considering it is not recommended. Phaedra has just finished her training and is ready to be assigned to her next assignment. While it may seem like she can do a lot of things, she literally has no experience, in combat or under a chain of command other than the instructors. She's technically only been alive for a few years, considering she is a clone. She bascially got unlucky and experienced a ton of crap before she finished her training.
So anyways, let me know how I did, and what I need to change. I tried to research as much as I could so her background was accurate, but I'm sure I've overlooked some things.
Thanks.
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... dra_volkov
First I must say I was impressed with the MASSIVE amount of background material. It was kind of overwhelming at first, but I eventually was able to digest it and immerse myself in it.
At first glance, it may seem like my character is some hard-bitten veteran with lots of experience. Well I specifically wanted to avoid that, considering it is not recommended. Phaedra has just finished her training and is ready to be assigned to her next assignment. While it may seem like she can do a lot of things, she literally has no experience, in combat or under a chain of command other than the instructors. She's technically only been alive for a few years, considering she is a clone. She bascially got unlucky and experienced a ton of crap before she finished her training.
So anyways, let me know how I did, and what I need to change. I tried to research as much as I could so her background was accurate, but I'm sure I've overlooked some things.
Thanks.