Approved Character New character submission - Sienna Shelton

[Floodwaters]

For review, my submission for my first character in Star Army:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:sienna

Edit: fixed broken link

 

[Wes]

Character approved! I look forward to meeting her in the RP.

Note: I moved your character page into the character folder.

Please create your user page here: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=members:floodwaters

 

[Sigma]

Two things to point out.

First, I was under the impression that we were not supposed to link images from outside SARP to our bios (e.g. photobucket, etc) and that we had upload images we plan to use for the wiki onto the site's library.
Section 2, Line V

Hotlinks and/or images hosted on third-party websites (only images on Star Army are permitted)

Second, it sounds like she's formally renounced her Nepleslian citizenship but it's not explicitly stated. I only bring up this point because, according to her bio, she was given citizenship at independence and then the whole running away/cutting ties leads me to believe that she would give it up in favor of Yamataian citizenship. However, whether or not she has given it up, it ought to be mentioned for the sake of clarity since she does start in a different faction.

 

[Floodwaters]

I must have overlooked that rule and I apologize. However, my "Wiki-ese" is a bit lacking (it took me almost 45 minutes to get the page formatted even with the template :/), so if someone would explain how to upload images to the wiki, I will happily correct this.

Regarding her citizenship status, I do suppose it could stand some clarification. Sienna did not formally renounce her Nepleslian citizenship, nor is she actively seeking citizenship in Yamatai. She was merely tired of the political rhetoric and resentful of the chaotic lifestyle that her insurgent parents raised her in and wanted to escape.

It was suggested to me that I use the YSS Eucharis plot to debut the character and see where it goes from there; I did not mean to make it sound as if she wished to outright join or defect to the Yamatai military immediately, just to hopefully catch a ride offworld. There is room for her political views to evolve as she matures, but as of now she has no strong allegiances one way or the other.

I will update her bio to better reflect this.

 

[Floodwaters]

Wiki page updated for more detail and clarification as requested.

 

[Floodwaters]

Minor revisions once more - she should be finalized except for the images that need to be uploaded to the wiki.

 

[Jimmy]

Hey, we'll done on getting your character approved.

Also, is that an EVE Online portrait I see there? If so, make sure you come fly with some of us sometime.