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Approved Character [New Dusk Conclave] Angela Hartbrook
- Thread starter Jack Pine
- Start date
Jack Pine
Inactive Member
@Ametheliana can I get a once over for this? Is for my own faction, so just need her reviewed. Had a bit of help from Wes, even got some art for her from him.
I fixed some errors.
Pick some more skills.
"...an bi-gendered female human..." you say human twice, which only needs to be stated once, but also, you said she is Nepleslian in the box. They're close, but it can be confusing and contradictory tbh as Neps are human descendants, but have cray other stuff mixed in.
Pick some more skills.
"...an bi-gendered female human..." you say human twice, which only needs to be stated once, but also, you said she is Nepleslian in the box. They're close, but it can be confusing and contradictory tbh as Neps are human descendants, but have cray other stuff mixed in.
Its says on the page there need to be seven.
Jack Pine
Inactive Member
I've added more skills, she now has seven. Double mention of human was fixed and replaced with nepleslian. @Ametheliana
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