Hi Demi,
Welceom to the SARP. I am one of the character reviewers, so I will make a first review of your character.
Overall a very good first try.
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I added a few wiki links for you at the top of the doc.
In the characteristics, you have
complextion is misspelled twice,
should be complexion.
Also his facial feature is rather vague.
Mikael has brown eyes, his facial features are those common to someone of his skin complextion on Nepleslia, though his eyes are more narrow then most others.
In psych area.
Several typos
distiant
should be distant
Neplesians
should be Nepleslians
In the history,
Nepleisan
should be Nepleslian (2 places)
A couple of grammar things.
work force as
an laborer
should be work force as
a laborer
Nepleisan military wanted
to part of him due
should be Nepleisan military wanted
no part of him due
Skill area
Need to fix several cut and paste errors. Your character , She is skilled
Fixed the items I've mentioned and then update this forum, for a re-review.
This character is pending approval for IC usage.