[NI] Yimeya Light Mining Ship

[Kyle]

Submission Type: Light Moduler Mining Ship
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... ght_mining

Faction: Civilian
FM Approved Yet? Yes

Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) Yes

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-w3300
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-m3301
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-m3302
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-m3303
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-m3304
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=na ... i-y1-m3305

Previously submitted? No.

Notes:

The modules I have listed are the basic ones, I do plan on adding more including combined ones as well but these are - as stated - the basic ones.

 

[Nashoba]

Missing details

Hull: ?
Shields: ? (Threshold ?)

Copy and paste error, suggest you replace with a link to the Ge x3300
Ge-XS-3000 Escape pods - the Henkei carries four with capabilities similar to Type 29 Escape Pod. Two of them are on the upper deck on either side of the bridge. The other two are located on the lower deck on either side of the computer room.

Suggestions
In your lounge use a link to the GS Standard lounge
Also under the power section, use links to the standard GS systems


Ni-Y1-W3300 - Anti-Ship Turrets -
Spelling error enginutity -> ingenuity
targetting ->. targeting

Rate of fire means that this can fire twice in a 10 second turn

Ni-Y1-m3301 - Refining Module
* Make a link from the module to the ship
to merry the module - should be marry
module is equiped - should be equipped
The ship is equiped - " " , also should be module


More review to follow

 

[Kyle]

Changes made. Also in relation to the turret, I figure with the components I've attached to it, it'd be capable of a better refire, unless there is some precedence I'm unaware of that doesn't allow that..

 

[Nashoba]

Approved