Approved Character NPC - Ship Designer

An NPC Ship Designer for Ketsurui Fleet Yards.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:takumi

Neat...

Was permission given to make this Nekovalkyrja NH-29H?

A 20-year old Neko? Wow... she should be dead... <.< Remember, Nekovalkyrja age a lot more quickly then other races. I'd say.. 2 or 3 would be around 20 years old physically?

Well, 'dancers' should be 'dancer's' in the Build and Skin Color section.

Other then those things, it looks fine enough.

This character is not yet approved for IC usage until above issues are clarified upon/resolved.

Fixed the typo, actually while she is 20, she was a Geshrin at birth, became a NH-29H by choice in YE 29 while working at KFY. This NPC is one that I have been coordinating with Wes on.

Actually, slightly off topic sorry, nekos age slower than everyone else. They are born looking like their adult forms, they are just 12" instead of regular sized. It usually takes ~3 months for them to grow to regular size but there is no difference. Addditionally, according to the wiki Nekos live longer than Geshrin and even NH-22C (Yamataians). They don't even age until ~75. Of course, Nekos haven't really existed for long enough for there to be a 20 year old neko.

Just my 10 cents, sorry for the off topic.

Well, Yui should be getting in her thirties now.

Nashoba, you've put far too much effort into this for me to deny it. But the reasoning written in for her to be an NH-29H doesn't make sense. There is absolutely nothing functionally different between an NH-29A and an NH-29H, except an extra finger and less-sensitive ears, so I'm not sure I understand why she needs to be one to allow "her to operate both as a Yamataian and Valkyrja", especially in terms of engineering.

On top of that, NH-29H are supposed to be exceedingly rare. This is the third one we've had in so many months. I have to draw a line somewhere.

As a second note: Please replace "Valkyrja" with "Neko." Neko is the term used throughout the wiki, the forum and in common usage; no one calls them "Valkyrja."

Doshi,

You are correct about the delta between a NH-29A and a NH-29H.

But Takumi was a Geshrin when she chose to upgrade to the NH-29H, she wanted to maintain her same physical appearance, but wanted the additional ability to use the equipment and systems she would be developing in the way that Nekovalkyrja would.

That explanation I can accept. The wording in the current description doesn't include the point about her physical appearance, and I was confused about the "Yamataian and Neko" part of it.

Make those modifications and I'll scoot this along into approved. Thanks Nashoba.

Updated and amended.

M'kay, I'm satisfied with that response. If Doshii is okay with the new revision, then so am I.

Hey guys, I've made all the corrections. Can we please get this moved to approved. I have things for this little lady to do :lol: