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Approved Character [NSS Sledge Mama] Liam Gervasius

Morbius

Morbius

Inactive Member
Character Article URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:liam_gervasius
Preferred Plot's GM: @CadetNewb

Twenty-four and only two years into his service, Liam Gervasius has a family tradition of service to live up to. Young but tough, he inherited the dry wit and practical attitude of his fathers line and is no less than they with regard to his own view of things in the galaxy.

Ambitious but patient, Liam seeks to climb the military ranks and earn his own captaincy prior to going forward and becoming an admiral eventually. Soft spoken, he has a deeply thoughtful nature and a tendency to see things as most do not.
 
Ok, I'm looking him over, and I'll likely give a more proper reply tomorrow. At a glance though, everything looks like its there. I'll have to go into detail in the morning. I recommend you fix the red links though. For your own name, make a userpage for yourself. I use my own to keep track of my characters, projects and so forth, and it makes managing things easier. As for the Data Jockey's red link, it seems the template needs updating - I'll update that myself tomorrow as well.
 
@Morbius

Besides what I covered in the last post, and looking at the inventory, things are potentially a little out of place, so you may want to move the items so they're under the appropriate header; it's not critical though, so you can relax on that. With his persona and skill set though, I notice the bar is set a bit high, and I hope that you'll be able to deliver in that regards during roleplay.

The only major thing to fix would be the red links, and that's just some red tape to deal with. Even if you don't get that done, I'll get you into RP when the time comes. We'll likely have a good spot to do it soon, most likely this week if the pace keeps up.
 
Too upper class roots or smart for his own good? I like crafting and running characters who are educated and reasonably intelligent but I'll dumb him down.
 
So long as you're able to pull it all off, there's no need to change his persona/history. Though, don't forget to fix up that inventory and red links.
 
@Morbius - we're almost ready to get you in. The character looks good to go, so I'll say it's Approved

I suggest you make your userpage on the Wiki though - you don't have to put any actual info about yourself there of course. It just generally comes in handy for keeping track of things, especially your own characters and projects.
 
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