Approved Character [OIF Salvation] Trashhead Treasure Three Three 33-7158-9427

Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:trashhead_treasure_three_three_33-7158-9427
Preferred Plot's GM: @Syaoran

Hope y'all don't have arachnophobia!

Alright well the first thing I have to ask is, do you have permission to use the artwork or did you make it? AS for the rest, hmm, I would like to see more on Treasure's history , not just about her fleet and such. She is only really mentioned in the last and smallest paragraph of her history. Also I need to know if she's part of Origin or one of the contract employees., either way she'd need to have arrived at dawn station at some point. The rest of it is pretty good, 'cept if you are a contract worker you wouldn't have the origin starting gear(but you would get the contract worker uniform)

Okay, those are fair comments.

• The artwork is definitely all mine, I can provide line art or high res versions if you don't believe me. Tsuguka's page is a bit outdated, but contains some of my older work too.
• As for the history, I cut a lot of it out at the last minute because I felt the whole thing was too much of a wall of text, and was kinda in danger of making her a woobie honestly. Didn't want to make them seem too Mary Sue-ish considering they are already kinda silly weird. But I've edited in a much longer revised version now.
• Yeah, she's a intended to be a contractor. Worked this in a little more.

I believe you, I just have to ask that every time a character sheet pops up with art already on it. The history is good too, doesn't matter if it's long if it's meaningful, which is what it is. Since she's a contractor, she'll start as a Neophyte with 100 KS/week salary. But I don't really see anything wrong with the sheet so I'm gonna go ahead and APPROVE it.