This review is for: Courier 2A
The submitted article is/has…
[X] A general topic sentence under the title header
[X] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
[X] Needed and/or
useful to the setting
[X] In the proper format/template
[ ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[X] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[X] No red and/or broken links
[X] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[X] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[ ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[X] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ ] Lacking Detail
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The article has…
[X] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[?] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[X] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
I intend to finish this review by: NOV 15, 2009
* Hull: 13
* Shields: 10 (Threshold 1)
How did you calculate these numbers?
Designers: OrIn fleet yards
Manufacturer: OrIn Fleet yards
Need linkage, capitalization
Head there are two 'bathroom' type Heads near the center of the middle deck.
This isn't an sentence.
The rear compartment of Deck one contains the engineering section, which holds tools to repair the ship, as well as EVA suits.
EVA suits should be linked.
Fielded by: Origin industries(20) independent corporations.
What's this (20) mean?
The ship contains a standard fire suppression system.
Fire Suppression system should be linked.
Shield Systems
The Courier-class carries only Navigational shielding, strong enough to deflect small-mid size debris. SDR 2.
Should be a lower-case n. Damage ratings don't apply to shields (Shields are SP); this also contradicts the ship's stats, which say it has shields.