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Approved Character [Origin - OIF Salvation] Trenton 'Wylde' Pollis

Okay looked over your stuff and and for the most part it looks good and I like the general idea. There are some typos but aside from that there are a few things that will need some adjusting.
  • Nepleslia was not founded until YE28 when the seceded from Yamatai, until then they were part of Yamatai, I'm not sure however when Yamatai acquired that territory.
  • The Iroma race was not encountered until YE30
  • I would like a little more detail on maintenance/repair what types of machines does he specialize in repairing?
 
I am sorry, been working on it slowly. Will have it done later today. Thanks for keeping up.

Edit: I think I am all set for a second viewing
 
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