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[Origin] Onset Shuttle
- Thread starter Kai
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Zack
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Looks and feels very trek-y, fun stuff. Remember I’m not a mod so this stuff isn’t official.
About the ship is supposed to describe the ship in a segment about a paragraph long so I believe you're going to need to put some fluff there. I think Key Features and the Mission Specialization bits will be fine even though they are only one or two words.
History and Background needs to be filled out too, at the very least just put when it was made and why it was designed.
In general you put 'various' as the organizations that field this. You might want to mention that it is for public sale somewhere in the about the ship bit, I think it would help describe this.
Rule wise, I think you need to state that the hull and shields are power-armor scale. Yes, I think it is kinda implied but it can't hurt.
And tech wise, because of how Ion thrusters work there is actually an upper limit on how fast and how much they can accelerate which generally limits them to slow. Of course there is nothing stopping the Origin guys from mounting multiple engines and such to get the performance that is listed and you don't actually say how many engines are on the shuttle so technically this is fine and dosen't require changing. However if you are interested about the technical details go here and scroll down to the picture that says 'Ion' http://www.projectrho.com/rocket/rocket3c2.html .
About the ship is supposed to describe the ship in a segment about a paragraph long so I believe you're going to need to put some fluff there. I think Key Features and the Mission Specialization bits will be fine even though they are only one or two words.
History and Background needs to be filled out too, at the very least just put when it was made and why it was designed.
In general you put 'various' as the organizations that field this. You might want to mention that it is for public sale somewhere in the about the ship bit, I think it would help describe this.
Rule wise, I think you need to state that the hull and shields are power-armor scale. Yes, I think it is kinda implied but it can't hurt.
And tech wise, because of how Ion thrusters work there is actually an upper limit on how fast and how much they can accelerate which generally limits them to slow. Of course there is nothing stopping the Origin guys from mounting multiple engines and such to get the performance that is listed and you don't actually say how many engines are on the shuttle so technically this is fine and dosen't require changing. However if you are interested about the technical details go here and scroll down to the picture that says 'Ion' http://www.projectrho.com/rocket/rocket3c2.html .
What's the "2" for and why is this shuttle so fast, especially when it's a civilian economy shuttle. It's twice as fast as military shuttles of this class from the most high tech nations (4750c (0.54 ly/h) for Nepleslia and 5,000c (~0.57 ly/h) for Yamatai).
Water for what? There's no sink or toilet aboard...
I made some corrections, such as removing it's/its errors.
