Wes said:The submitted article is/has…
[ ] A general topic sentence under the title header
Instead of a sentence there is a sentence fragment.
[X] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
The artwork is too large and causes horizontal scroll.
[ ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
Explain in the article why this weapon was created. In fact, it needs a history section.
[ ] In the proper format/template
Please avoid using forced line breaks ( \\ ) in articles.
[ ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
"ROF: as fast as you can pull the trigger/ 200 RPM "
[ ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
DR is too high. Follow the Damage Rating page.
[ ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
The nomenclature section does not have a nomenclature listed.
OsakanOne said:"SuGAR" (pronounced "Tsu-gar" to rhyme with cougar not sugar) has a nice ring to it.
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