This review is for:
Combat Form, Mark III. F "Cogadh Mhaighstir"
with URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?...royal_defense_initiative:combat_form_mark_iii
The submitted article is/has…
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] A very high level of overall quality
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] A general topic sentence under the title header
[N/A] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[N/A] In the proper format/template
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] No red and/or broken links
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Obtusely redundant
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] C◎ontain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Lacking Detail
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[N/A] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[N/A] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
@CadetNewb [●﹏●] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[◎[▪‿▪]◎] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
To the submitter: Is this a refit or overhaul of a previous article? If yes, provide a link and a list of changes.
I intend to finish this review by: 5/21/17
Notes:
Just add year of creation and we'll be all set and ready!