Approved Submission Pegasus-class Yume no Kaseki (Fossil of Dreams)

[Charaa]

Submission RP Example

https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/and-beyond.71059/

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=collaboration:starship:eyes_that_look

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)
2. Outlaws (Independent)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

a while ago I asked GPT what's the next ship i should make for the Mining Guild after giving it a list of ships and classes the Mining Guild already has, I've also added prompts for a ship that was made by both Yugumo Corporation, and the Mining Guild, and that became this. Also because it was made by both, i had it in the collaboration name space, rather than corp name space.

 

[Andrew]

A few things I'd like to input from the Yugumo side on this--

• In terms of getting around the ship section - (aka transit, lifts etc) - I'd like if possible for the updated article to be slid in there - Yugumo Standard Interior Transportation Systems on Star Army Space Roleplay
• The Ionche Fabrication was replaced withhttps://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:yugumo_corporation:interiors:standard_fabrication_and_factory_areas and Yugumo Fabrication Systems on Star Army Space Roleplay
• Several of the other compartments were also updated - Yugumo Standard Housekeeping Lockers on Star Army Space Roleplay (So if you could maybe go through and update the old links and references to the newer interiors that would be great- the Tengumo-Class Space Station on Star Army Space Roleplay featured a lot of the new interiors and since such hard work was put in on them I'd like to use them.)
• I'd like to see some unique compartments on this ship that really give it some specialization. It needs some unique ones made.

So in summary, I'd like to see the interiors and systems updated to the new standard ones that I tirelessly put effort into. A lot of the outsourced gear and sections were updated so I'd like to see that done.

 

[Wes]

I'd like to avoid the creation of new first tier namespaces (collaboration: ) if possible, so when it's approved it should go in items:starship_classes: or starships: or something.

 

[Charaa]

as i mentioned to Andrew, i made some edits, and sorry Wes!

 

[Wes]

Here's some sections that could use some work still:

Default text:


Empty & Repeated Section

Section: "AI" is empty.

Section: "Getting Around" is empty.

Section: "lower level" should be "Lower Level" since it's a section header.

Pricing: I think this needs to be changed, 10,000 KS is way too low for a ship with a jumbotron screen for a hull.

Section nesting: Could you please fix the section nesting? What this means is: Subsections should go under sections and they should be smaller by 1 than the section header in front of them, e.g:

====== Title Header H1 ======
Text
===== Big Section H2 =====
Text
==== Section H3 ====
Text
==== Section H3 ====
Text
===== Big Section H2 =====
Text
==== Section H3 ====
Text
=== Little section H4 ===
Text
==== Section H3 ====

If you skip from H1 to H3 or H2 to H4, that's a nesting issue.

I am happy to assist if needed.

 

[Charaa]

Section: "AI" is empty.

the AI is the KAIMON Chamber, as well as the Security Hardware, seen below, but I think what your getting at is there should be some text there.

Section: "Getting Around" is empty.

I added a text to the section,

Pricing: I think I might have confused you here, but I edited to round it up from Daikoku’s price.

Section nesting:

done I figured out the main problem causing that lol

 

[Wes]

Approved.