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Approved Submission [RA] Raiconian Alliance (Faction Splash Page)

Sham

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Submission Type: Faction Splash Page
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=raiconian_alliance

Faction: Raiconian Alliance
FM Approved Yet? Yes, By Me, at the time of this post
Faction requires art? Flag Art Req!

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? Yes, Flag
Previously Submitted? Nope

Notes: Both unapproved articles that are connected to this page are being submitted individually.
 
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I moved the infobox down a little so it didn't hit the TOC. You need a sentence or two after each header to meet our style guidelines. In this case, after Councils and Colonies. Also please remove the red links at the bottom or create those pages.

I don't see any other issues, although I should mention I thought it was weird when you described their politics as fascist and then in the economy section it looks like socialism.
 
Nazi and WWII Italy (Under Mussolini). I took the term for its nationalistic implication. However I simply replaced it with socialism. I feel it fits better (And Wes has a point).

Links removed. Some brief sentences added.
 
Perfect. Approved!
 
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