Gigantic history = bad. My attention isn't completely focused on this at the moment, so if I'm making a mistake, sorry. Since your history mostly concerned others, I guess that's better than the character itself doing shit before you started actually playing it. If you read other character posts you'll see I really don't like people making big histories that make their characters into someone special before they're actually played. I'm saying this because your history was the longest and most detailed I've seen in a while and I don't usually like that. The guys being nondescript is all right, I guess. I was going to say more but I've forgotten, I'll edit if I remember. Don't take this the wrong way, overall it was ok.