Requesting help on weapon design

[mizunoyoroko]

I need help designing a gun. I really stink at this and need some guidance. How do I make it? That's what I've got for now, which as you can see isn't that great. Please leave only relevant comments, it's not up for approval right now.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:hasr

 

[Doshii Jun]

Shouldn't you wait for the Butch to be completed first? I mean, I'll help ya. But still.

 

[mizunoyoroko]

Yea, but I am planning on submitting this all at once, so it will all have to be done at one point or another anyway.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I thought we weren't supposed to turn in multiple pieces of tech at once.

 

[Wes]

Fixed red links and "it's" errors. IT'S = IT IS. That's a 3rd grade English skill. Learn it people! And at least fix the broken links before you submit something, please...when you submit something that isn't even "finished" it just shows you don't care.

Anyway, I think there's not enough detail and I would really like an image to go with this. Also, it doesn't make much sense to have this until the "Butch" exists ICly.

 

[Soresu]

What? The Butch? What's that?

 

[mizunoyoroko]

To the above posts:

Doshii: I've seen multiple pieces of tech submitted simultaneously before. Even if I need to do it seperately thought that'd be fine. I'd rather have it all hammered out so I could submit things one after another.

Wes:

Fixed red links and "it's" errors. IT'S = IT IS. That's a 3rd grade English skill. Learn it people!

I'm sorry for my typo, this goes to show once again, that like everyone else on this board I am human.

And at least fix the broken links before you submit something, please...when you submit something that isn't even "finished" it just shows you don't care.

Did you read my first post?

I need help designing a gun. I really stink at this and need some guidance. How do I make it? That's what I've got for now, which as you can see isn't that great. Please leave only relevant comments, it's not up for approval right now.

That last part there means it's not being submitted. Evidently you yourself didn't care enough to read the first post.

Anyway, I think there's not enough detail and I would really like an image to go with this. Also, it doesn't make much sense to have this until the "Butch" exists ICly.

That's why I asked for help, I don't really know enough about detailing guns. You're right of course, I won't be submitting it until after I hear the word on the butch (which isn't ready yet either). As for the art, that makes sense, there is an art requirement for all guns anyway. Also....all those red links you keep mentioning. I looked at the old revision, I only found 1. Sorry about that.

Soresu: There's a link to the Butch in the article, but here's a quicklink to it.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I'll help, Yoroko. I'll see you online tonight, hopefully.