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Approved Character [Resubmit] [GMNPC] Nagase Nagako

She rarely carries a weapon.
This doesn't make sense for a Star Army officer.

Nagase wears the standard Black Spiral Battle Dress uniform, but does not wear the armored jacket.
The uniform mentioned does not exist.

legendary Ketsurui Kikyo
What justification do you give for saying Kikyo is legendary? I was not under that impression that she was well known.

Other than that, it seems okay to me.
 
Wes said:
This doesn't make sense for a Star Army officer.
My thinking here is that when she actually leaves the Black Spiral complex and takes up Star Army dress, she'll carry a Type 28A NSP. I wanted to reinforce the idea that she doesn't need a weapon to kill.

The uniform mentioned does not exist.
No, it doesn't, because I suck. I've got it mostly done, so when it is, I'll submit it. We can ice this until that time.

What justification do you give for saying Kikyo is legendary? I was not under that impression that she was well known.
I thought she was that well known, at least within the intelligence community. She crafted the assassination manual for SAINT, and once led that organization. I'll take it out, though; the wiki shouldn't use that term anyway.

Thanks for the review, Wes.

This character is on ice until the creator gets his act together.
 
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