Approved Character Rima

[Nameless]

Big centaur lady is ready

Rima on Star Army Space Roleplay

wiki.stararmy.com

@club24

 

[club24]

Ill give it a look over after work GM wise, been out of the NTSE too long to remember the guides on stuff lol

 

[club24]

I'm happy to approve it from my GM POV (also friendly heads up since this isn't yet a plot feel free to link their "current placement" directly to the company corp:galactic_horizon and just give them a rank like "freelancer")

from a player/fellow tech writer I'm glad you've included specific mention that projectile weapons actually use up that freeform supply in order to use, definitely interested to continue expanding the whole concept of this gal through time to flesh out the tech itself but I'll leave it up to a character reviewer to read over as well

 

[Nameless]

Okay, I added the rank and placement.

Yeah, became a little conscious about making things like that clearer since on other sites I've been on, they tend to default to thinking the ammo is infinite.

 

[demibear]

Looks good, though it would be nice if there was a max damage tier for each type of weapon she can generate. Tier 6 would work for some due to her size.

 

[Nameless]

I've expanded on it well enough I hope

 

[demibear]

It's perfect, APPROVED!