Approved Submission RUDaaS Missile

[Zack]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:uso:rudaas_missile

Submission Faction(s)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:rudaas_missile

 

[Ametheliana]

Checklist incoming. Have any changes been made since it was last submitted?

 

[Zack]

I removed the range listing on the YH Warhead since that's not really necessary (it's space, physical things travel forever until they hit something). Everything else is as it was.

 

[Wes]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

1. Needs a sentence of normal text after the specifications header.

2. Didn't see anything that would hold up approval.

When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

 

[FrostJaeger]

Shouldn’t the first sentence in the About section be re-worded slightly? I ask because it states that the RUDaaS fills the roles of a “long range anti-ship missile, short range anti-ship missile, and demolition charge with a single design” - yet none of its warheads, including those that are currently up for review, appear to be intended for those roles. Perhaps it would be better to say that the RUDaaS “is a weapon system designed to fill a variety of roles with a single design”?

 

[Wes]

@Zack Feel free to change the wording if you think Frost's idea is helpful.

 

[Zack]

@Wes, I added the line under the specifications header.

 

[Alex Hart]

I removed the range listing on the YH Warhead since that's not really necessary (it's space, physical things travel forever until they hit something). Everything else is as it was.

So it's still a missile with a plumeria/sharie's main gun BUT NOW with infinite range?

 

[FrostJaeger]

Nope, @Alex Hart - because the Yuuko-Howitzer Warhead was permanently rejected.

 

[Wes]

3-Day approval timer.

 

[Alex Hart]

If it's permanently rejected why was it mentioned here?

I removed the range listing on the YH Warhead since that's not really necessary (it's space, physical things travel forever until they hit something). Everything else is as it was.

Just curious.

 

[FrostJaeger]

It was mentioned here, @Alex Hart, because this post was made ten days before the aforementioned warhead's rejection.

 

[FrostJaeger]

Approved, as it's been more then three days since @Wes made this post. Apologies for the delay, @Zack.