What color is the tail?
Which is her given name and which is her surname, so that I call her the appropriate name in the appropriate situation?
Here is a small bit about naming conventions to explain a little why I want to be sure.
I sort of want her occupation link to be more forthcoming. As I mentioned to you, this occupation is not always seen, so perhaps the link could say like, Information Technician? DM me if you want to brainstorm something else. The link would look like this:
Code:
[[stararmy:occupations:information_technology|Information Technician]]
I love that "Over Dramatic" is capitalized that way, but it doesn't need to be.
"Being assigned to the ship she would have to constantly pull double shifts due to several issues that had popped up during the ships service light and due to several miss uses of the ships Megami system."
I don't really like this. Saying that misuses of the system caused her to work longer makes me feel like that implies too much about the crew and the failures of the MEGAMI system. Maybe find a new reason for her working a lot? She could also be developing technology or could have a friendly relationship with MEGAMI that makes work take longer due to their conversational relationship.
Thanks for making this character! She is cute! To anyone wondering why I allowed a second character from a player, seeing as I like to have one pc per player, it was an object of necessity as Soban-chan wrote some RP between their pre-existing character and this one. I sort of want her to transfer once we're back from the tour of duty and have told Soban-chan to plan for that, though things change here and there. :]