Aside from making me laugh and otherwise amuse me, This character has very few problems. He's a crazy, Enigmatic Mishhu commander with his own set of rules and way too much power for his intelligence level.
Grammatically, there is a lot wrong with this article, most of it being misspellings of names and titles. MisHHu and Plebeian come to mind, but there are numerous others I can't quite recall at the moment. If you could go through this article and fix all spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, that would be great.
If you're having trouble doing so, ask someone to edit it for you.