Approved Submission [SCU] Kaar General Resources

[Arieg]

Submission Type: Major Corporate Factionish
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=kgr:kgr

Faction: Sesestran Colonial Union
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) Yes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) No
Contains New art? (Yes/No) Yes
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No

Notes: Effectively the SCU's version of Origin that builds everything from space stations to toilet paper.

 

[Wes]

Please don't use forced line breaks ( \\ ) unless absolutely necessary. Instead, list items like products using a list (bulleted list is fine) in accordance with the wiki style guidelines.

Also try to put a little text after each header, even if it's obvious like "this is a list of products" etc.

 

[Arieg]

Adjusted.

 

[Doshii Jun]

I'll take a look at it.

 

[Doshii Jun]

In-field, in-browser spellcheck. Please use it. Also, the word "various" is rarely needed. I edited the "history" for you.

I don't see any big problems here, but so far you've only got weapons up. Do you plan to submit consumer products too?

 

[Arieg]

Should I add those in sorta of a unlinked generic fashion? (IE TP)

 

[Doshii Jun]

Unlinked is fine for now, as long as you have them.

 

[Doshii Jun]

Double-checking — edits made here?

 

[Arieg]

Fixed yes!

 

[Doshii Jun]

Approved.