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Approved Submission [SCU] Kaar General Resources

Arieg

DEFCON Everybody Dies
Submission Type: Major Corporate Factionish
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=kgr:kgr

Faction: Sesestran Colonial Union
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) Yes
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) No
Contains New art? (Yes/No) Yes
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No

Notes: Effectively the SCU's version of Origin that builds everything from space stations to toilet paper.
 
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Please don't use forced line breaks ( \\ ) unless absolutely necessary. Instead, list items like products using a list (bulleted list is fine) in accordance with the wiki style guidelines.

Also try to put a little text after each header, even if it's obvious like "this is a list of products" etc.
 
In-field, in-browser spellcheck. Please use it. Also, the word "various" is rarely needed. I edited the "history" for you.

I don't see any big problems here, but so far you've only got weapons up. Do you plan to submit consumer products too?
 
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