Approved Submission Section 6

[Jack Pine]

Submission Type: Sub-Division
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:uso:skyguard:section_6#more_about_section_6

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? (Yes; Zack during a JP)
Faction requires art? (No)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes)
Contains New art? (No)
Previously Submitted? (No)

Notes: this is going to start out rather small at first

 

[Jack Pine]

@Zack , @Alex Hart , @Wes , @Ametheliana , awaiting review

 

[Ametheliana]

Let's get Zack's FM permission in the thread ^-^

 

[Zack]

I approve!

 

[Wes]

Formed by Jack Pine in the YE 39 after operation Roach Hotel on B7R.

I feel like Operation Roach Motel and B7R should be links, as there's no context in the article to explain what those are. Also, this isn't a complete sentence.

The departments should probably be made into headers.

 

[Jack Pine]

fixed the sentence, but not sure how to link the that particular thread or the wiki for the planet, couldn't find those

 

[Ametheliana]

[[www.url.com|Roach Motel]]

 

[Jack Pine]

um still send you to a blank page

 

[Jack Pine]

ok got the link fixed @Wes and @Ametheliana

 

[Jack Pine]

@Wes turned the department names into headers just like you suggested

 

[Ametheliana]

We talked a bit about this and came to some conclusions that made this able to be approved.