I'm not a character mod, but to sum up my thoughts, you need more. More Pre-RP, More Skills (you should have 7), more about his family.
On top of that, there are several key elements of character creation that you missed. First of all, the top line should read, "Sgzyr is a player character played by Lions_Purge." The goal is for people to know who is playing the character (also, once you correct that, you should make a user page). Second, you NEED an organization, preferred plots, a job, etc. You will get nowhere in this setting without a plot to tie down to, especially as a new character.
Overall, this character needs some serious work. I understand that it may be a "work in progress" but if that is true then you should have waited until this character was 100% finished before you submit the character or post using the character.
On that note, I would highly recommend that you delete your post in the Public Forums before the Admins swing by and do it for you. This character is not approved and therefor doesn't exist in the SARP Universe. Subsequently, a character that doesn't exist yet can't be stranded on a planet. Also, there is no explanation in the character's page explaining how they got their ship or how they got stranded. EVERY useful piece of info about your character should be found in your character's page. If you intend certain things to be a mystery (how they got stranded, most of their backstory, etc) then thats 100% okay, but that's something to be done through RP. Your character page should contain no mysteries so that way it can be properly reviewed and that GMs can properly plan for your character.
Just my two cents.