Approved Character Shar Galviotta Idam

[SentientRace]

Shar Galviotta Idam, Troop Master of the Gartagen Union's Rapid Reaction Force. Intended for the Gartagen plot made by Ira.

I await judgment of the SARP gods.

 

[Ira]

You get another skill. You should probably make it something recreational.

Everything looks good, you should mention how he became a troop master. Also First contact was made with aliens like "last week" in game time.

other then that character is looking good.

 

[SentientRace]

I find it very hard to believe that first contact should be as simple as 'let's make a pact, I'll kill people for you' within a week. A language doesn't take a week to translate or learn, how are we even talking to them enough to understand what is going on?

I'll change that part in the history, but I'm bringing this up elsewhere.

 

[Ira]

Well, we can talk about this via RP as far as "lets fight people for you" The Gartagens are doing it for them selves. The Mishuu will slaughter then just like they would any other.

 

[SentientRace]

Finished making changes. Hope it's better. ;d

 

[Ira]

Looks good to me. Lets see what the mods say.

 

[Doshii Jun]

Based on the faction manager's OK, this character is approved for IC usage.