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Approved Submission [Shasta No Sekai] Fire Ant Mech

Charmaylarg Dufrain

Charmaylarg Dufrain

🎖️ Game Master
Submission RP Example
https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/shasta-no-sekai-17-hour-karaoke-stream-highlights-ultrachat-readout.69841/
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=corp:shasta_no_sekai:terror_wolf_project:fire_ant
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Outlaws (Independent)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Its been a year and a half since my last submission and almost two since my last serious submission. I'm hoping since it's not an obligation and it's making things I like I won't hate this anymore.

Its a big mech that spews radioactive napalm paint from a giant jury-rigged pressure washer made from a salvaged starfighter wreck.
 
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This one looks good, the only thing I can spot is a minor quality issue which is it would be great if a sentence or so of prose could be put between the headings and the bullet lists in the following sections: Key Features, Statistical Information, Speeds. Other than that looks good. Address that minor cosmetic and I will put a stamp on it.
 
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[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread
 
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