Sensor package: The opening sentence is a sentence fragment. The section under the Specifications header is empty. "km" is the proper abbreviation for kilometers. "Used to help locate and identity objects in close proximity to the craft, these can either be active or passive sensors," is a sentence fragment. "Similar to the pulsing sensor system found in the Neshaten Scanner Array Suite, with the exception being that the actual range is much different," is a sentence fragment and needs a link to the Neshaten Scanner Array Suite. The actual type of sensors (eg what they sense) is not clear.
Starfighter: Remove the word "it's" from this article and replace it with "it is" or "its" as needed. See:
It's vs Its. Spellcheck the article.
Fix this comma splice: "Designed for dogfighting, the Sho'run derives its name from it's appeareance, it is equiped with four close-range cannons and two heavy engines for it to help in its role as an interceptor."
If this sentence is finished, add a period: However, though it is fast and agile, it's designers decided not to includ heavy armor or lots of shielding in order for it to accomplish its role. Because of that, some pilots often refer to it as a 'flying coffin'
Here's another sentence fragment: "Is equiped with a SC-Basic Sensor Package. "
Technology-wise, the submission seems fine but it needs a higher quality level in regards to grammar and spelling. Proofreading is a basic expectation of all SARP articles.